Molecular Systems Biology Response to Reviewers: Revision Guide
An MSB revision guide for making models, perturbations, omics data, source data, mechanism, and transparent response correspondence agree.
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What makes this journal worth targeting
- IF 6.7 puts Molecular Systems Biology in a visible tier, citations from papers here carry real weight.
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How to use this page well
These pages work best when they behave like tools, not essays. Use the quick structure first, then apply it to the exact journal and manuscript situation.
Question | What to do |
|---|---|
Use this page for | Building a point-by-point response that is easy for reviewers and editors to trust. |
Start with | State the reviewer concern clearly, then pair each response with the exact evidence or revision. |
Common mistake | Sounding defensive or abstract instead of specific about what changed. |
Best next step | Turn the response into a visible checklist or matrix before you finalize the letter. |
Quick answer: A Molecular Systems Biology response to reviewers should show that computation and experiment now answer the same systems-level question. Start with the editors' controlling issues, then answer every comment. State the uncertainty, action, result, and exact location. Cite page and line, figure panel, equation, model version, dataset, source-data file, code repository, or protocol. Because MSB uses transparent peer-review practices and publishes review-process correspondence with accepted articles when applicable, write the response as durable scientific documentation, not private persuasion.
Last reviewed: July 13, 2026.
Use the MSB revision readiness scan before uploading. Initial fit belongs to the MSB submission guide, status belongs to MSB under review, and the MSB journal profile provides broader context.
From our manuscript review practice
In MSB revisions we review, the common failure is parallel repair: computational authors improve the model while experimental authors add validation, but the two streams never test the same mechanism. The response must show what prediction changed, what perturbation tested it, and how the result updated the model and claim.
What the transparent review model changes
EMBO Press's transparent process makes the response more than an administrative attachment. Public Peer Review Process Files show editorial decisions, reports, and point-by-point author responses alongside accepted work when the policy applies. A future reader may evaluate how the evidence changed.
That creates a systems-specific revision standard:
Reviewer concern | Evidence the revision needs | Incomplete response |
|---|---|---|
Model and experiment are disconnected | Prediction, perturbation, observed result, and model update | Adding simulations and experiments in parallel |
Mechanism is descriptive | Competing mechanism and discriminating intervention | Another correlation or network diagram |
Omics result lacks validation | Orthogonal assay, independent cohort, targeted measurement, or bounded claim | More pathway enrichment from the same data |
Model is not identifiable | Parameter sensitivity, uncertainty, alternatives, and observable constraints | Reporting one fitted parameter set |
Generality is overclaimed | Cell type, condition, scale, species, or cohort boundary | Calling one context a universal system |
Reproducibility is incomplete | Source data, code, environment, model equations, and protocol | A repository link without executable provenance |
Copyable MSB response template
Use bold or boxed reviewer comments and regular text for responses. Quote revised text where it helps a public reader understand the change.
Dear Editors,
Thank you for inviting revision of manuscript MSB-2026-0418,
"Feedback Control of the Integrated Stress Response." The decision identifies
three controlling issues: model identifiability, causal evidence for the
proposed feedback loop, and reproducibility of the single-cell analysis.
We summarize the integrated changes below and answer every comment in order.
Page and line references use the clean revised manuscript.
Editor Issue 1: Model-experiment integration
Response: We derived a prediction that distinguishes feedback from feed-forward
control, designed a timed inhibition experiment, and refit both models to the
new trajectories. Only the feedback model captures recovery after washout.
See page 7, lines 4-29; new Figure 3A-F; equations 6-9; and Source Data Figure 3.
Reviewer 1, Comment 2
"Several parameter combinations fit the original trajectory equally well."
Response: We agree. We added profile-likelihood intervals, global sensitivity,
and a practical-identifiability analysis. Two parameters remain weakly
identified, so we removed their biological interpretation. See page 11,
lines 6-30 and Appendix Figures S4-S6. Code release v1.2 reproduces the analysis.
Reviewer 2, Comment 4
"The single-cell state requires orthogonal validation."
Response: We added targeted protein measurements and perturbation recovery in
an independent batch. The state marker replicates, but its frequency is lower;
the abstract and discussion now bound prevalence to the tested cell system.
See page 14, lines 3-25 and Figure 5B-E.
Sincerely,
Dr. A. Researcher, on behalf of all authorsThe template is deliberately explicit about negative or narrowing results. Transparent correspondence makes silent claim preservation especially visible.
Cite page, line, figure panel, code, and source data
Every response needs an exact page and line citation, but MSB revisions often require a deeper chain. Name the figure panel, model equation, analysis version, source-data file, protocol, or repository release. A reviewer should be able to move from comment to evidence without inferring which code or panel changed.
When figure numbers or model equations move, audit every location after final compilation. Preserve repository tags or commit identifiers when the revision changes analysis behavior.
Typography for transparent correspondence
Distinguish reviewer text from author response with bold text, shaded blocks, indentation, and explicit labels. Do not rely on color. Keep editor priorities, reviewer comments, quoted manuscript text, and author interpretation visually separate.
Use the same structure for second-round comments. A public Peer Review Process File should remain readable without the submission interface that originally grouped the text.
Build a model-experiment response ledger
Comment | Scientific uncertainty | Revision artifact | Claim affected |
|---|---|---|---|
Parameters are non-identifiable | Model uniqueness | Profile likelihood and sensitivity | Mechanistic parameter claim |
Feedback is not causal | Competing topology | Timed perturbation and washout | Network mechanism |
Omics state is descriptive | Biological validity | Orthogonal assay and independent batch | Cell-state claim |
Batch drives clustering | Technical robustness | Integration diagnostics and held-out batch | Population structure |
Model lacks predictive test | Generalization | Prespecified out-of-sample trajectory | Forecast claim |
Code cannot reproduce figure | Provenance | Tagged environment and pipeline | Reproducibility |
Assign one owner across computation and experiment for each row. Otherwise, coauthors can produce individually competent changes that never resolve the shared uncertainty.
Tone calibration for MSB responses
Avoid | Better |
|---|---|
"The reviewer is asking for an unrelated experiment." | "The requested assay measures abundance but does not distinguish the two network topologies. We added a timed perturbation that does and state the remaining abundance uncertainty." |
"The model fits the data very well." | "Both models fit the training trajectory; only the feedback model predicts washout recovery. Figure 3 reports held-out error and parameter uncertainty." |
"Batch effects were corrected." | "We report integration diagnostics, rerun the analysis without correction, and reproduce the state in a held-out batch with lower prevalence." |
"All source data are available." | "Each figure panel maps to a named source-data file, and release v1.2 rebuilds Figures 2-5 from raw inputs." |
"The mechanism is now proven." | "The perturbation supports feedback under the tested cell type and stress regime; alternative mechanisms outside that boundary remain possible." |
Push back by identifying what evidence can discriminate the scientific alternatives. Cost or inconvenience alone is not a systems argument.
In our review work with MSB revisions
In our pre-submission and revision work with Molecular Systems Biology manuscripts, we audit the response, model equations, code, parameter files, perturbations, omics processing, figure panels, source data, and headline claims together. These are qualitative Manusights patterns, not MSB acceptance statistics or access to private peer-review files. The public transparent-review model lets authors compare the expected artifact shape with published process files.
Pattern 1: the MSB model and experiment are revised in parallel
Computational authors add sensitivity analysis while experimental authors add a validation assay, but the new experiment does not test a model prediction and the model does not incorporate the result. In Molecular Systems Biology revisions, we require a prediction-perturbation-update chain. The response names the competing models, the observation that separates them, the actual result, and the model or claim changed afterward.
Pattern 2: omics depth substitutes for orthogonal evidence
A reviewer questions whether a cell state, module, pathway, or regulator is biological. The revision adds more differential-expression plots, enrichment results, or latent-space views from the same dataset. We trace independence of evidence across assay, batch, cohort, perturbation, and analysis. For an MSB claim, another transformation of the same counts rarely supplies the missing biological test.
Pattern 3: one fitted model is treated as the mechanism
Several parameterizations or network structures explain the observed trajectories, yet the manuscript interprets one fit biologically. We inspect identifiability, sensitivity, priors, optimization starts, uncertainty, held-out predictions, and alternative topologies. The response should remove mechanistic interpretation for parameters the data cannot identify.
Pattern 4: the public response is clearer than the released analysis
The letter carefully describes a new pipeline, but repository defaults, environment files, source-data names, or figure scripts still reflect the original submission. We run a provenance map from raw input to each revised panel. Transparent prose is not reproducibility when the executable record points elsewhere.
The useful information gain is integration: the revision is complete only when model, perturbation, data, source files, and claim describe the same biological system and boundary.
Check the MSB response and integrated evidence chain before resubmission.
Handling reviewer disagreement
When one reviewer asks for more biological scope and another asks for a tighter model, summarize the shared uncertainty for the editor. One discriminating perturbation and a bounded claim may answer both better than a broad experimental expansion.
Do not hide conflicting requests in separate reviewer sections. The editor needs one systems-level revision plan across the reports.
Why an MSB revision can still be rejected
Revision does not guarantee acceptance. Rejection-on-revision risk remains when computation and experiment stay disconnected, the requested causal test is replaced with another association, source data cannot reconstruct figures, or negative evidence is added without narrowing the claim.
Most dangerous is a response that is exemplary as correspondence but documents a manuscript that still cannot support the systems-level conclusion.
Submit if; think twice if
Submit if: the model makes a discriminating prediction, the experiment tests it, the result updates the model or claim, omics discoveries have proportionate validation, and source data plus tagged code reproduce every revised panel.
Think twice if: computation and experiment remain parallel stories, parameter interpretation exceeds identifiability, another analysis of the same omics dataset stands in for independent evidence, or the public response promises a reproducible workflow that the repository cannot execute. Transparent review makes those inconsistencies durable rejection-on-revision risks.
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Final MSB revision audit
- Put editor priorities before reviewer sections.
- Link each concern to a prediction, perturbation, result, and claim.
- Report parameter uncertainty and identifiability.
- Distinguish omics discovery from orthogonal validation.
- Test batch, cohort, condition, and model dependence.
- Map every figure panel to source data and code.
- Tag the executable revision environment.
- Cite page, line, panel, equation, dataset, and repository version.
- Preserve readable reviewer-author typography.
- Write the response for a future public reader as well as the current reviewers.
How this page was reviewed
We reviewed current EMBO Press journal materials, transparent-review policy, and public Molecular Systems Biology Peer Review Process Files, then applied the model-experiment-source-data audit above. This page helps authors verify revision coherence; it does not estimate acceptance or replace the editor's instructions.
Measure this page after 14 final GSC days. At day 21, keep, revise, or stop based on indexing, query ownership, impressions, clicks, and qualified review starts. Four preview starts are a product-intent proxy, not exact-query demand proof.
EMBO Press sources establish the transparent-review context. The model-experiment ledger is Manusights analysis.
Frequently asked questions
Open with the editors' controlling systems-level issues, then answer every reviewer comment in order. For each point, state the scientific uncertainty, action, result, and exact page, line, figure, panel, model, dataset, or source-data location.
Molecular Systems Biology uses transparent peer-review practices and publishes Peer Review Process Files with accepted papers when applicable. Write the response as durable scientific correspondence: complete, professional, traceable, and understandable alongside the revised paper.
Yes, when the requested experiment cannot distinguish the proposed mechanism or falls outside the paper's systems boundary. Explain the uncertainty behind the request, provide the closest discriminating perturbation or analysis, and narrow the claim where evidence remains incomplete.
Expect scrutiny of whether computation and experiment are mutually informative, whether perturbations distinguish mechanism, whether omics findings have orthogonal validation, whether source data and code support reproduction, and whether the systems-level claim survives all added evidence.
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